Creative Messaging in a Direct Response World

Should a company focus on building their messaging around their brand image, or on driving direct response via their Web site and online media? Branding and direct response messaging can co-exist online, and local business profile pages are a good place to meld writing techniques for both.

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June 27, 2008 Categories

I’ve just come off the road from numerous meetings with national and regional advertisers. One common area of interest among advertisers seems to be: how to best communicate to the online audience.

Should a company focus on building their messaging around their brand image, or on driving direct response via their Web site and online media? At the risk of annoying my SEO department, who are happy to pack a keyword into every section of a Web site (no doubt necessary), the answer is both. Branding and direct response messaging can co-exist online, as both are vitally important to short- and long-term sales creation.

Brand messaging allows a company to creatively portray their culture, goals, and offering to their prospects and customers in the form of short code. Some of the best branding tag lines encapsulate the entire essence of a company in very few words. Examples:

Wal-Mart: “Save Money. Live Better”

vs.

Wal-Mart: “We sell Apparel, Baby Goods, Books, Electronics, Garden & Patio Supplies, Gifts, Jewelry, Movies, Music, Pet Supplies, Sporting Goods, Toys & Video Games”

or

GE: “Imagination at work”

vs.

GE: “Your source for Appliances, Aviation Engines, Consumer Electronics, Electrical Distribution, Energy, Finance – Business, Finance – Consumer, Healthcare, Lighting…”

You get the picture. Not every communication needs to be a keyword list. Leverage your brand as a tool to create persuasive copy when writing online content and ad copy where space is at a premium.

Local business profile pages are a good example of how to meld writing techniques for both brand and direct response.

What is a Profile Page?

Profile pages are an information resource to promote your business to customers looking for localized information in search engines, city guides and Internet yellow pages.


Many site publishers offer businesses the opportunity to post basic company information either free of charge or for a small flat fee. Here are a few:

Most of the profile page entry forms prompt you for similar information: e.g., year established, business hours, brands sold, etc. It’s important to weave a persuasive selling message into your copy. It also doesn’t hurt if the selling copy contains keywords (ha, now I’m back in the SEO department’s good graces).

The More Things Change the More They Look the Same

For years, one medium has presented advertisers with a similar creative challenge of short, text-based descriptions in a limited ad space environment: the yellow pages. So what can we learn from their time-tested creative best practices? Like everything else in the directory business, there’s an acronym used to describe the practice: RASCIL. I’m not sure who coined the phrase; however, it has become a universally accepted creative process used for local advertisers.

RASCIL is:

When you create profile pages across multiple Web sites, keep a list so you can remember which sites to go to when your copy needs to be adjusted or updated as your business grows and changes focus. One final piece of advice: track and measure the leads that come in from profile pages. Telephone tracking can be a great way to understand where your online leads are coming from.

Profile pages can be one of the most cost effective ways to promote your business online. Research the sites that serve your local trading area and create some persuasive messaging to drive more customers to your doorstep or phone today.

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